Hell Inc Sketch Punch-Up

I’ve drafted a sitcom sketch set inside HELL.INC., a creaking, understaffed bureaucracy that tries—badly—to manage eternal torment. The premise works, the characters are fun, but the jokes still aren’t detonating the way I want and, more importantly, the overall plot could be clearer... (Budget: $250 - $750 USD, Jobs: Comedy Writing, Content Development, Content Writing, Creative Writing, Fiction, Ghostwriting, Screenwriting, Script Writing, Short Stories, Writing Tutoring)