Video Edit Feedback Needed

I recently recorded a site-visit video where I walk viewers through a hectare-by-hectare land measurement and give a short lesson on the topic. I’ve done a basic edit, but before taking it public I need a fresh set of eyes... (Budget: ₹600 - ₹1500 INR, Jobs: After Effects, Audio Editing, Video Editing, Video Post-editing, Video Production, Video Services)