Design Review & Improvement Insights -- 2

I have a single design file that could really benefit from a fresh set of experienced eyes. What I need is straightforward: an honest critique that highlights what works, what feels off, and where I can refine things so the final result feels polished and on-brand... (Budget: $30 - $250 USD, Jobs: Branding, Color Design (Iro Shitei), Design, Graphic Design, Kinetic Typography, User Experience Research, Visual Design)