Indonesian-English Story Substantive Edit

I have a non-fiction short story based on my personal experiences, written first in Indonesian and then rendered into English. I need a thorough substantive edit that sharpens structure and pacing, preserves my voice, and smooths cultural nuances so both versions read naturally and consistently... (Budget: $15 - $25 USD, Jobs: Book Writing, Creative Writing, Editing, Fiction, Language Tutoring, Non-Fiction Writing, Proofreading, Translation)