Investment Report Scrutiny and Refinement

I have a detailed report that will be shared with funds and prospective investors. Before I circulate it, I want a fresh set of expert eyes on every line. Your task is to scrutinise, flag anything inconsistent or unclear... (Budget: $30 - $50 USD, Jobs: Business Consulting, Business Writing, Data Analysis, Due Diligence, Editing, Financial Analysis, Investment Research, Report Writing)